Today at school with Mr Madren we were improving comments from other people. what we did was we found a bad comment then pasted it onto this then improved it.This is my improved comment that i did with Mr Madren.
Wow that was amazing i'm sure that will inspire people. I liked the way you used images to explain and had it displayed nicely in different places and not all bunched up. Next time maybe you could try adding more color and have a Screencastify of you reading through it..
