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Monday, 7 August 2017

The dog barked

last week for writing we had to elaborate on one small couple of words called (The Dog Barked)
our WALT was to to elaborate on our ideas.
The dog barked

Yesterday at the SPCA in a small cyan kennel There  was a beautiful golden Labrador with a silky coat of soft fur .The fluffy dog named Goldie lox was snoozing in a dog print bed full of fluff .When she  saw me she  jumped up, and out of nowhere a soft cute woof poured out of her mouth followed with a calming cry of excitement .




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  1. Annameika Jack13 August 2017 at 08:47

    Wow, you have used fantastic elaboration. Goldie Lox is a cool name for a blond dog. I love the way you have used interesting verbs. Well done Lucy.

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  2. Francine11 September 2017 at 12:21

    Great description Lucy! you have used lots of interesting words to describe her.

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