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- The young wizard comes to the cliff to summon the creature That lurks in the darkness.
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- Dragging me through the forest was the evil ants they had liked what hey saw and thought it was a perfect meal to take back.
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My Description
The night had come… the battle of the giants. It was mid night when they attacked but it was strange they had trumpets?They had masks and big cloaks. Everyone fled but once they arrived they put down their suitcases blew their trumpets ad revealed themselves they all had big ears? It was the bfg apocalypse.The huge bfg well one of the bfgs opened his suitcase to reveal a disco ball and the other one of the bfgs pulled out gallons of frobscottle. Everyone at the castle was partying all night. In the morning the Queen work with a horrible sight there was thousands of bfgs lying every where between millions of people.There was food every where, the top of the castle had broken off and one of the bfgs where having a bath in her pool. She froze with fear then fainted and that was the end.
Good job Lucy- love the BFG- your complex sentences made it come alive!
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