Last week Mrs haris read us four different pigeon stories Don't let the pigeon drive the bus,Don't let the pigeon stay up late,The pigeon wants a puppy and The pigeon needs a bath. Then we picked one of the stories to write our opinion about I chose the pigeon wants a puppy but in the story the pigeon gets a puppy but then it doesn't like the puppy so it wanted a walrus so we wrote if the pigeon should or shouldn't get a walrus and I said the pigeon shouldn't get a walrus.
I don't think that the pigeon should get a walrus because the 1000kg walrus would crush the 900g pigeon till it was flat as a piece of paper. Also how would you get the walrus to your house if it's too heavy to move.
Another reason is how would you fit a 3.6 meter long walrus in your small pigeon bath without letting your owner know? And if you do fit it in the bath you would need saltwater not freshwater from the tap. And also where are you going to get all that saltwater from?
If the pigeon gets a walrus how would they make it stay? If you try to put the walrus in a pool or in the sea it would swim away or it would hop out of the pool or the bath and waddle away and smash the door ways while it escapes and runs off to the sea and the pigeon would get upset.
At the end of the day in my opinion the pigeon will get a walrus and see what it is truly like and the pigeon will change its mind and want something else that is even bigger and even more terrifying and it will go round and round in circles and the creatures will get bigger and bigger and more and more terrifying.
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