Te Manu Tukutuku Poem

This first week of school for literacy we started off on writing and for writing we did a poem about moving into the new school. We had to include two feelings and four senses see,smell,hear and touch. We also had to include at least one simile and alliteration in our poem. We first started off by brainstorming in a big group about feeling words then we brainstormed what we could hear,see,smell and touch. After we started writing here is my work.

Te Manu Tukutuku Poem 

As I walked into the brand new building with and unexpected and excited look written all over my face.

I hear the screaming of excitement all around me.

I can see people scrambling onto the playground from the brand new window of Punui-o-Toka. 

The smell of freshness being blown in by a soft breeze  and the clean smell of the building.

The touch of the soft walls were like the feel of a cats fur after washing. 

I felt so lucky that I would be able to Treasure the terrific time here.