I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Monday, 31 May 2021
Figurative Language + Brainstorming
Friday, 28 May 2021
Burger Competition
Negatives -
The burger was too sloppy (too much sauce)
Messy and hard to eat
Too much meat (really thick Patty)
lacked in texture ( missing ingredient ALL MRS FAULT )
Positives -
Had a range of complementing flavours
Lots of colours
The presentation was amazing looked like an advertisement
Tasted good
How I would rate the burger -
Flavour - 8.5 (Had a lot of flavours but wasn't too overpowering and the flavours complement each other.)
Colour - 7 (We had a few fillings of colour like cheese, gherkins, pineapple and tomatoes.)
Texture - 3 (Had too much sauce and a lot of meat, was sloppy but the bacon did ad a tiny bit of texture.)
How I would've improved -
The element that our burger really slacked off on was the texture. Unfortunately, we didn't have a lot of crispy or crunchy fillings but we did try to add texture where we could like grilling the buns, lettuce and making the bacon crispy. Next time I would add less meat and sauce so that the texture from the buns and the bacon really stood out. The next thing I would want to improve on is the colour, I feel as though we had a good amount of colour in the burger but was overwhelmed by the browns of the juicy patty, bacon, and bbq sauce. The flavour I feel was our strongest point so the only thing I would want to improve on is the pattys I feel like we could've added more bbq sauce into them and make them slimmer.
Burger Evaluation Sheet -
How does colour enhance the overall effect of your meals?
People naturally gravitate toward foods with appealing bright colors and avoid foods with unappealing or worrisome colors. Making colour in food very important as people will want to eat something with vibrant colours over bland colours.
How does texture affect the feel of the product as you eat it?
The thickness of some foods can affect their taste by slowing down the rate of which the flavour exits the food. If that same food were to be melted into a liquid, it would taste much stronger. Therefore people are more likely to eat harder, crunchier foods over soft foods
Name two different ingredients you used to enhance the flavour of your meat pattie.
BBQ Sauce, Gherkins
Why did you use these flavours? What did they do to your burger?
They added strong flavour but they were not overpowering and they set the flavour theme for the burger
How does the way takeaway places advertise their products influence our decision in what we eat?
Advertisements usually use fake burgers to make it look juicier, colourful and overall more attractive and appealing to others.
What are 2 safety measures that are important when storing and cooking red meat?
Always have clean hands when handling meat, Store the meat in the coldest part of the refrigerator or in a meat bin, Throw away ground meats, sausage and organ meats after 2 days, Defrost meats in the refrigerator or in the microwave by using the defrost setting — never on the counter
What is something that you have enjoyed taking part in re the design processes we have done eg cupcakes, 4 way wraps, burgers
My favourite part of designing the meals was finding unique and odd ways to add flavour and texture.
Creative Writing
Brainstorming -
Hunter swoop -
Top left -
The frosty mountain top reaching for the muddy white blanket covering the sky blocking out the rays of the sun, desperately trying to breakthrough.
Top Right -
A second snowy horizon bathed in a warm glow, dispersing the clouded blanket.
Bottom -
The rough rubble of the well-used road stretches out further into the horizon than the eye can see, accompanied by brightly colored strips of organization and society. The static-like strip of road, a passage to another place, another time, another feeling, another scent.
Middle -
The road swerves in fear of the looming mountains overhead gazing down upon the dry, grey road and the bland, barren tussocks and dry sand closing in from either side.
Mix&Match -
Figurative Language | Comparing two unlike things using the words like or as | |
Literal Language | An exaggeration of the facts. | |
Simile | Saying one thing and meaning something else. | |
Metaphor | Writing with detail to arouse one or more of the 5 senses. | |
Personification | A phrase is common to people who speak the same language- saying one thing but meaning another. | |
Imagery | Meaning exactly what you say. | |
Idiom | Comparing two unlike things not using the words like or as. | |
Hyperbole | Repetition of consonant sounds in a piece of writing. | |
Alliteration | Giving human qualities to non-human things. |
Wednesday, 26 May 2021
Sustainable Fishing
Sustainable Fishing -
Sustainable fishing is where you ensure that there will be fish in the future for other people to have. But the best thing to do currently is not fish at all due to the fact we have already pushed marine life to the brink of extinction by plastics, shark finning, fishing, and bycatch. Letting the population reproduce and grow back to a safer population. There is no possible way to restrict how much fishing boats are catching and the number of dolphins or other sea life due to bycatch. As long as we still eat fish, fishing companies still have a motive to continue fishing, as the fishing industry is a very profitable business.
How is commercial fishing a threat to dolphins and birdlife?
Fishing is by far the biggest threat to dolphins and birdlife. There are many different techniques to fishing, some more lethal and “efficient” than others, one of the worst fishing methods is trawlers where a massive net hurds in schools of fish then closes the top of the net trapping the herds of fish inside. This method is dangerous as it has the highest rate of bycatch, meaning several other aquatic life gets stuck in the nets as well. Most bycatches die in the fishing nets before they can be released back into the ocean. Not only are trawlers killing thousands of marine life, but it is also most if not all fishing techniques that are harming the ocean's ecosystem.
Tuesday, 25 May 2021
Shark Finning
What is shark finning?
Shark finning is the disgusting practice of slicing off the fins of a live shark then discarding what's left into the ocean, leaving the sharks to die a slow, sad, gruesome death. The fins are then dried and sold as the main ingredient in the traditional Chinese dish, Shark fin soup. Every year millions of sharks are caught and farmed for their fins leaving millions of dead, decomposing, finless sharks at the bottom of the ocean floor.
Why is it a delicacy?
the traditional dish Shark fin soup dates back to over 1000 years and it plays an important role as an indicator of social standing as shark fin soup can range anywhere above $100 for a single bowl. With the country become more wealthy the demand for shark fin soup has skyrocketed meaning more sharks are being caught for their fins. For such an expensive dish the fins are bland and have no taste, nor is there any nutritional value. Usually, there is flavoring added to the dish to give it a taste.
How is this impacting our oceans?
Sharks play a big role in keeping the food chain stable, as they are the apex predators. With the shark population decreasing rapidly due to shark finning and bycatch they are being pushed to extinction. This will destroy the ocean's ecosystem as a new predator will take the shark's place, with no predators the animals will overpopulate and run out of their source of food and eventually die out. This chain goes on and on until eventually there is nothing left.
Monday, 24 May 2021
Friday, 21 May 2021
Critical literacy
Brainstorming task -
Factual - Satirical (Websites)
Critical literacy practice -
Thursday, 20 May 2021
The Starfish Poem
Starfish poem -
Once upon a time there was a wise man
who used to go to the ocean
to do his writing.
He had a habit of walking
on the beach
before he began his work.
One day he was walking along
the shore.
As he looked down the beach,
he saw a human
figure moving like a dancer.
He smiled to himself to think
of someone who would
dance to the day.
So he began to walk faster
to catch up.
As he got closer, he saw
that it was a young man
and the young man wasn't dancing,
but instead he was reaching
down to the shore,
picking up something
and very gently throwing it
into the ocean.
As he got closer he called out,
"Good morning! What are you doing?"
The young man paused,
looked up and replied,
"Throwing starfish in the ocean."
"I guess I should have asked,
why are you throwing starfish in the ocean?"
"The sun is up and the tide is going out.
And if I don't throw them in they'll die."
"But, young man, don't you realize that
there are miles and miles of beach
and starfish all along it.
You can't possibly make a difference!"
The young man listened politely.
Then bent down, picked up another starfish
and threw it into the sea,
past the breaking waves and said-
"It made a difference for that one."
The main message behind this poem is that your input, even if it's small makes a difference. We need to help our ecosystem and all it takes is the courage of one person to put a small amount of effort into standing up and doing something about it and people follow their lead and start encouraging other people to the same. This is shown at the end of the poem when the man asks why he is bothering to make a difference (Throwing starfish back into the sea) when there is so much damage (Miles of starfish). He then explains to him that even the smallest amount of effort can make a difference by throwing a single starfish into the sea and saying "It made a difference for that one."
Wednesday, 19 May 2021
Drink Driving Ads
Drinking and driving advertising -
Is this text fair?
No, the text wasn’t fair, drink driving can happen to anyone of any ethnicity. However, in the advertisement it makes it appear as though it was mainly white + Maori guys who drank excessively and irresponsibly, ending up in crashes and trouble with other people.
How are children, teenagers, or young adults constructed in this text?
In this ad it presents the characters as college students or around young adults who are the big drinkers and act irresponsible and cause incidents. This ad was very directed toward young adults and maybe even teenagers however it excluded adults and children completely.
How does the text present age, gender, or cultural groups?
Males - Like to drink alcohol a lot and stare at women and cause incidents due to recklessly drinking.
Females - Don't drink enough for it to be a problem, just there to be eye candy, responsible enough not to crash or cause issues with alcohol
Ethnicity - Asian people were too smart to drink, the white guy was supposed to be the sober driver but fucked up, Maori blokes were the ones drinking and trusted the other white guy to be the sober driver but ultimately got screwed over by him.
Why is the text written this way?
The text was written this way so that people can understand and start to grasp how important and serious drunk driving is and how much it can affect yourself and the people around you. Overall it tells us to be responsible when drinking cause it can go downhill very fast and people can get hurt.
Tuesday, 18 May 2021
News Article - The Great Pacific Garbage Patch
PLASTIC BECOMING PART OF OUR DAILY DIETS?!
Over the years garbage has been building up in the ocean and we have left it to build up for long enough and the horrifying effects of our actions are starting to reveal. Your toothbrush, your water bottle, the wrapper on that chocolate bar you ate, where did it go after you threw it in the bin or dumped on the side of the road? Every year on average 1.15 to 2.41 million tonnes of plastic enter the ocean through rivers and streams. That 1.15 to 2.41 million tons of plastic end up in The great pacific garbage patch is a massive patch of rubbish just floating in the middle of the ocean and this is only one of the 5 massive patches of rubbish. This floating island of rubbish measures 1.6 million square kilometres, an area twice the size of Texas or three times the size of France. It is estimated to have 80,000 tonnes of rubbish which is almost equivalent to the weight of 115,000 full grown elephants, WOW.
You may be thinking how the hell does 80,000 tonnes of rubbish end up in a big clump in the middle of the ocean? This is due to the water currents pushing all of the rubbish further out to sea, the rubbish then gets trapped once they enter a gyre (Circular currents) that is how the rubbish ends up on a scarily massive island.Once they enter the gyre it isn't likely for the rubbish to escape the area until the plastics degrade into smaller pieces (microplastics) under the extent of the sun, or get washed away by waves or ingested by marine life.
So now we know what the problem is and how it got there, but why is it a problem at all, why should we care that there are tonnes of plastic floating around in the ocean? This is where the big problem of microplastics comes in (Tiny plastic particles.) Effectively, the ocean is becoming plastic soup. All our waterways lead out into the ocean so not only are we polluting our ocean we are polluting our water supply as well. It has been proven that microplastics have been found in our drinking water. A recent study by OrbMedia analyzed 159 water samples, sourced from both tap water and bottled water in 14 countries, and found that over 80% of all samples contained tiny plastic particles, with an average of 4.34 plastic particles per liter of water. Not only has it been found in our water supply but it is also affecting the food and crop that we consume, It has been confirmed that The number of microplastics in pre-cooked, vacuum-packed instant rice could be as high as 13 mg per serve.
Every living and breathing person has probably consumed microplastics by now, but what does that mean for us, is it something that can cause extreme health effects? Because we are new to the knowledge of microplastics, researchers don't know for sure what effects microplastics have on our health. But “there can be no effect,” says Pete Myers, founder and chief scientist of the nonprofit Environmental Health Sciences and an adjunct professor of chemistry at Carnegie Mellon University. Digesting microplastics likely exposes us to chemicals that the plastics contain which are known to be harmful to humans. These chemicals have been linked to a wide range of health issues, including reproductive harm and obesity, as well as organ problems and developmental delays in children.
So we know that plastics and waste we produce can all come back to bite us in the ass, but what effect does it have on marine life and the environment and what does it contribute towards climate change and global warming? The most direct effect of the garbage patch is on marine life that populate in areas of pollution. Due to the size and colour of the plastics fish and other aquatic animals easily mistake the plastic for food and once it enters their digestive system it can cause a lot of harm. Some of the most important animals that take part in caring for our environment are whales and dolphins, and it's been recorded that at minimum 300,000 whales and dolphins are slaughtered each year according to the WWF (World Wildlife Fund). This is due to the effects of habitat loss, rubbish, and by catch. Dolphins and whales not only look after ocean but our whole ecosystem, when they resurface for air they release phytoplankton which plays a key role in absorbing carbon dioxide.But due to the decreasing population of whales and dolphins less phytoplankton is being released when whales resurface for air, meaning that less phytoplankton are absorbing the excessive amount of carbon dioxide polluting our atmosphere.
Science Experiments
Monday, 17 May 2021
Critical literacy Vocabulary -
Wednesday, 12 May 2021
Critical literacy reflection -
For the past week and a half of term two, we have been solely focused on critical literacy in English. This was an interesting topic to look at and I found it really fun learning how to look deeper into what your seeing online and see what you can't see at first glance and seeing the texts from different perspectives. But this leaves me wondering the reasoning behind what writers and directors try to sneak into ads and text. After learning about critical literacy I created a slideshow reflecting everything I've learnt about the topic so far.
Friday, 7 May 2021
Brainstorming task + CL
Brainstorming task -
Critical Literacy -
Thursday, 6 May 2021
The great Pacific Garbage patch
With a new term comes a new topic in social studies, we are going from focusing more on history-based topics to more geography-based topics, and what more perfect topic than the ocean, the title is called "trashing the world." This topic is all about learning the importance of the ocean and the effect that we have on the ocean and vise versa. We have kicked off this topic by looking at the giant plastic issue in the great pacific garbage patch. This is the slide show I created reflecting what I have learnt so far from this topic.
Wednesday, 5 May 2021
Critical Literacy
What makes this video convincing?
This report was very convincing due to how professional it looked and they edited it in a similar way to new reports we see on the internet all the time. During the report, they added in medical advisors making it seem more genuine tey also added public opinions on the topic of the report and sowed protestors having their say on what was right, this made it seem very realistic and made the report overall more convincing.
Who published this video?
The video was published by Onion Network who is known to create fake but convincing stories with often genuine stereotypes and guidelines. te network is great at disguising these stories by adding in advisors and public opinions not to mention the editing in the clips to make it seem even more real.
How are teenagers portrayed in this clip?
In this clip, teenagers are portrayed as braindead and incapable of communicating with others specifically their parents, and only respond with sighs, grunts, and groans. Throughout the video, we can visually see that the teenager is glued to her phone and takes no interest in anything other than online conversation and activity.
Why has the director cast them this way?
The director has chosen to cast them this way so that the storyline seems more real and genuine and that the actors are your average person. They also wanted to link the actor's behaviour to realistic teenage behaviour.
In whose interest is this text?
I think that the targeted audience was more teenagers than parents so that teenagers who see the video can reflect on ways that the video relates to them and how true the clip is.
What social realities does this video portray?
The stereotypical teenager, Protests from the public, Pictures of the teen when they were younger, A doctors insight and advice, medical data, news reporters.
Tuesday, 4 May 2021
Alkaline Metals
Monday, 3 May 2021
Musicals! -Drama
Starting off the second term in drama we are looking into musicals, musicals can be defined as a live performance or a film that has singing or vocal aspects along with dance or choreographed movements. There are 5 different types of musicals, Book Musicals, Revue Musicals, Jukebox Musicals, Film Musicals, Concept Musicals, and Pop/Rock Musicals.