Starfish poem -
Once upon a time there was a wise man
who used to go to the ocean
to do his writing.
He had a habit of walking
on the beach
before he began his work.
One day he was walking along
the shore.
As he looked down the beach,
he saw a human
figure moving like a dancer.
He smiled to himself to think
of someone who would
dance to the day.
So he began to walk faster
to catch up.
As he got closer, he saw
that it was a young man
and the young man wasn't dancing,
but instead he was reaching
down to the shore,
picking up something
and very gently throwing it
into the ocean.
As he got closer he called out,
"Good morning! What are you doing?"
The young man paused,
looked up and replied,
"Throwing starfish in the ocean."
"I guess I should have asked,
why are you throwing starfish in the ocean?"
"The sun is up and the tide is going out.
And if I don't throw them in they'll die."
"But, young man, don't you realize that
there are miles and miles of beach
and starfish all along it.
You can't possibly make a difference!"
The young man listened politely.
Then bent down, picked up another starfish
and threw it into the sea,
past the breaking waves and said-
"It made a difference for that one."
The main message behind this poem is that your input, even if it's small makes a difference. We need to help our ecosystem and all it takes is the courage of one person to put a small amount of effort into standing up and doing something about it and people follow their lead and start encouraging other people to the same. This is shown at the end of the poem when the man asks why he is bothering to make a difference (Throwing starfish back into the sea) when there is so much damage (Miles of starfish). He then explains to him that even the smallest amount of effort can make a difference by throwing a single starfish into the sea and saying "It made a difference for that one."
Talofa, Lucy!
ReplyDeleteReally really nice work! You've included a lot of statements and have added really good evidence to back it up. You've portrayed the message really well.
There's nothing that you can work on that I can think of right now, but in the future if I do think of something I will definitely come back and comment it.
Great blog! Looking forward to reading more of your blogs.
From, Kahciar.