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Friday 13 May 2016

I walked through a forest to a log cabin.

I strolled  through the enchanted magic  forest deep in the shark tooth mountains. Next to the shark tooth stream. In  the stream were sharks shaped like shark tooth. And the trees the leaves were shark teeth.


I strolled  through the enchanted magic forest deep in the shark tooth mountains. Next to the shark tooth stream. In the stream were sharks shaped like shark tooth. And the trees the leaves were shark teeth. sweet birds  so cute then started to growl roared opened mouth with big shark teeth swarming after me. the path disappeared night full was on its way keeped walking and walking. My foot got stuck in squishy mud now the dark is upon us rats were running scavenging for food. Thunder lightning flashes through the misty clouds shark toothed running through the clouds dropped and chased me running as fast as i could all i could see is flashing lighting. Scratching  mice rats and leaves ran straight into a prickly bush. Looked back and there were bright yellow eyes staring at me. Eyes moved towards me trying to escape the bushes routes wrapping around me and squeezing me like a snake my eyes closed. I woke in morning pulling all the prickles out of me started walking again as i could hear rattling of fire and smoke floating through thick air i strolled towards it a log cabin i knew i was safe again.

1 comment:

  1. great writing Lucy - i liked some of the words that you used like squishy! You had me feeling a little bit scared so i was glad that it turned out all right at the end and you were safe! Mwah xxx

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