I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
well done Lucy - you are very clever writing all your information and summarising the facts.I liked how you wrote it on slides on top of the pictures so you could see what you were writing about.HOw do you think the disease spread in the trenches? Do you think they would have been very clean and dry?
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well done Lucy - you are very clever writing all your information and summarising the facts.I liked how you wrote it on slides on top of the pictures so you could see what you were writing about.HOw do you think the disease spread in the trenches? Do you think they would have been very clean and dry?
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