The outrageous smelly old trenches sneaky, cheeky, little, brown, smelly, fat rats nibbling and feasting on a soldiers ripped and ruined haversack. Maybe the reason the stinky old rats are doing that is because they are scavenging for food and disgusting dead bodies. Like eating worms because they have an empty stomach. The puzzlement is where did the rats appear from and why did they?
Their territory was shocking. Slushy gooey mud because of the miserable weather flooding, rain, spitting hail stones, soft snow, spooky lighting, scorching sun, icy grounds,foggy morning, roaring thunder and soldiers running through it in a fast speed dash. I wonder how the landscape of the trenches were invented and when were they invented?
People had passed away lying on the muddy dirt red liquid blood all over. Maybe they had a deadly disease or … been shot. I wonder how would they get disease in the trench?
In the trenches under the surface sand-sacks draining like a waterfall because of flashing lightning gun shots whistling through the air like a dart. I wonder?
well done Lucy - great writing and describing words... mama has some books you can look at about WW1 which show lots of pictures of the trenches...
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