I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Lucy, I'm Nika from St Bernadette's School. I like how you used different sizes for each word. Maybe next time you could add more colour to make it stand out more.Why did you decide to use black and white?
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I like how it looks like a cloud. is it spost to tell me things about you
ReplyDeleteyes dose it look like it
DeleteHi Lucy, I'm Nika from St Bernadette's School. I like how you used different sizes for each word. Maybe next time you could add more colour to make it stand out more.Why did you decide to use black and white?
ReplyDeleteThank you for your comment.I chose black and whit because it makes the words in white pop out.
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