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Saturday 18 March 2017

The Crash

About a week ago we did some fun writing were we got to pick a photo and then we had to write about it we had to make sure we used adjectives




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  • Rainy day
  • Ice wind \
  • No survivors
  • Striked spins
  • Thumping thunder
  • Sharp flashes of lightning
  • Five hour flight have just begun
  • Last light from the mountains
  • The sun was never to come up tomorrow  
  • Fighting the flickering fire
  • My hopeless hope had run out





Wake up,Wake up,Wake up,Wake up,Wake up,Wake up Wake up. hu  you ready to go WHAT IT'S THREE A.M IN  THE MORNING (so come on the planes waiting on us ) he took my luggage and put it in the plane by the time he came back i was ready to go. We jumped in and we were off, our five hour flight has just begun. After an hour of reading i could hear thumping thunder and sharp flashes of lightning ,it didn't really bother me because i had been worse  so i plopped my earplugs in and fell asleep. Then i woke up to the strangest sound It all started on a rainy day the sky was grey and lonely but no hope was lost in me i was still waiting for a phone call suddenly the phone rang finally i picked up the phone excitedly wait it wasn't the right voice then i reoliesd the pizza man saying that my pizza request had been denied, NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
I hanged up straight away then it rang again WHAT NOW!! I picked up the phone finally it was the right person.(hello this is doctor fatbottom here ) doctor what, (fart bottom anyways i am inviting you to help me get samples in antarctica ) well when is it  (tomorrow ) WHAT!(what what's the problem) i haven't even(bep bep bep bep). i should probably go by some cat man do clothes (i wonder if they are made out of cats).
(TEN MOMENTS LATER) right ready to go in the morning what time? Probably eight´oCLOCK time set eight´oCLOCK done. Wake up Wake up Wake up every was drunk the pilot had been knocked out so the plane was doing violent spins.Looking through the window we were in the middle of nowhere everyone was throwing people off the plane WHAT! .Everyone had lost their minds. looking out the window we were starting to get close to the ground i ran to the pilot's room THE PILOT WAS THROWING THE CO_PILOT OUT THE DOOR,we were getting closer to the ground by the second. Oww no the pilot saw me so  i booted him out the door i will alway regret that moment.sundly doctor fatbottom walked in the door (does anyone want some nuts haha).Then he momentarily fainted i looked in the window AAAAAAAAAAAAAA HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH we are about to hit the ground BOOM.
All i could see was the snow fighting the flickering fire  i escaped out the window of the plane, as the Last light from the mountains went down it was never to come up tomorrow my hopeless hope had ran out.

THE END

2 comments:

  1. Well done Lucy - love your story! Knew there would be some farts and bottoms in there somewhere! Maybe you could work on some punctuation so that it is easier to read and the sentences aren't quite so long! Funny story though!

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  2. WOW!!! This story was so good. I like how you did some words in different sizes. Maybe next time you could check if there are any spelling mistakes. This reminded me of when I made a made-up story. Keep it up!

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