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Tuesday 18 December 2018

Day 3 Awesome Animals Activity 1 SLJ

Activity 1 
For this activity we have to create a beast then describe it on our blog.For this activity i wrote it as a story and called it   The Lone Walker 


The Lone Walker 

No one knows its name only the cries of terror that come from its prey. It has a thick coat of Stiff fur in the color of midnight black. It only comes out at night and prawls in the shadows of the trees. It has a long Slick,thick tail sweeping behind its slim body. it has eyes like the galaxy purple grey and black with hundreds of white specks. It has long pointy tusk like Teeth like a walrus hanging from its mouth like fangs. It has pointy ears that move in the direction of every sound waiting and waiting. Its feet are dark fluffy grey but not siff like the rest it was like silk. it had a paw like foot with huge hawk like claws that were a dark brown like a piece of chocolate you would have eaten hundreds of years ago. This creature is only feared by one thing .......US 

1 comment:

  1. Hi Lucy!

    Me again :)

    Wow! You've used some amazing adjectives here. As I read through your description, I can picture exactly what the Lone Walker looks like. I can even imagine how his fur would feel! Great job! I'm really impressed with your use of similes as well. You've got a wonderful imagination! Have you seen or read Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find Them?

    Another fantastic post Lucy! I can't wait to read more! :)

    Blog ya later!

    Mikey

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