I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Today in CIP I created a DLO about KidsCan which is what this mufti day is fundraising for. In this DLO I had to include what KidsCan is and what they do. Also to show how you can help by donating at the website on the slide.
I appreciate how focused you are in CIP on Wednesday's and that has allowed you to complete great DLOs like this. This looks very professional and I like how you clearly paraphrased the ideas of KidsCan.
Hey Lucy, I liked how you explained all about Kids Can. My favourite part was when you explained what Kids Can does and what they provide. Maybe next time you can made the text a bit bigger. How long did it take you to do this?
Hi Lucy, Vin here Awesome slide but the intro to what we are doing is lacking a bit of info, it's supposed to be a rundown on what you have done/doing. You have said what you had done today but not a short sentence for why, other then that your slide is cool.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say. Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about.
Kia ora Lucy!
ReplyDeleteI appreciate how focused you are in CIP on Wednesday's and that has allowed you to complete great DLOs like this. This looks very professional and I like how you clearly paraphrased the ideas of KidsCan.
- Miss Birtch
Hey Lucy, I liked how you explained all about Kids Can. My favourite part was when you explained what Kids Can does and what they provide. Maybe next time you can made the text a bit bigger. How long did it take you to do this?
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ReplyDeleteAwesome slide but the intro to what we are doing is lacking a bit of info, it's supposed to be a rundown on what you have done/doing. You have said what you had done today but not a short sentence for why, other then that your slide is cool.
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Hi Lucy, It's Hollie I like how you described what Kids can was , What their mission was and that.
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