I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Well done on completing another activity. I see that you've chosen to do acrostic poem for this task too - do you like this form of poetry? I find that it can be quite tricky to come up with words that begin with the appropriate letters and make sense within the topic. You've done quite well though. Can you tell me what you mean by 'necessity' in this context?
Would you like to go to Beijing one day? I'm in two minds about it (undecided). I think it would be amazing to be immersed in a different culture but the pollution problem is quite worrying. Can you think of anything they could do to reduce the amount of air pollution in their city?
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Kia ora Lucy,
ReplyDeleteWell done on completing another activity. I see that you've chosen to do acrostic poem for this task too - do you like this form of poetry? I find that it can be quite tricky to come up with words that begin with the appropriate letters and make sense within the topic. You've done quite well though. Can you tell me what you mean by 'necessity' in this context?
Would you like to go to Beijing one day? I'm in two minds about it (undecided). I think it would be amazing to be immersed in a different culture but the pollution problem is quite worrying. Can you think of anything they could do to reduce the amount of air pollution in their city?
Bye for now,
Mikey :)