I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Yum! What a delicious looking veggie garden you'd have. Beautiful and colourful too! I like all the fruit you've included - strawberries would be at the top of my list too. Would you use all of the berries to make something? Maybe a smoothie? Or do you like to eat them as they are?
Well done on completing another activity Lucy - you're so close to finishing the entire programme! :)
Hello Lucy my name is Hollie from South Hornby School.I like the way you put the fruit and veges in a list.But next time maybe you could write a blurb to describe about it.But I like it
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Talofa lava Lucy,
ReplyDeleteYum! What a delicious looking veggie garden you'd have. Beautiful and colourful too! I like all the fruit you've included - strawberries would be at the top of my list too. Would you use all of the berries to make something? Maybe a smoothie? Or do you like to eat them as they are?
Well done on completing another activity Lucy - you're so close to finishing the entire programme! :)
Happy blogging!
Mikey :)
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ReplyDeleteHello Lucy my name is Hollie from South Hornby School.I like the way you put the fruit and veges in a list.But next time maybe you could write a blurb to describe about it.But I like it
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